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Luke VanDusen

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meh starts good.

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3 out of 5 stars
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2 out of 5 stars
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2 out of 5 stars

Évalué le: 2024-09-10

Well this was a waste of a credit sadly. Story starts off good. But the narrating got to me by 4 hours in. It seems like the narrator says something then the MC says it right after. or it comes off as the MC is talking to the narrator at times.

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meh

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1 out of 5 stars
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2 out of 5 stars
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1 out of 5 stars

Évalué le: 2024-08-09

the MC is terrible. if he doesn't get his way he becomes more vile then any villian in the so called story. when the MC is unbearable...not sure how this book has so many additions to its series.

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what stands out?.....the lack of substance.

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1 out of 5 stars
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1 out of 5 stars

Évalué le: 2024-05-27

here we are in the 3rd installment of the "hero" Amelia. This whole story would work so much better with out the main character being in it. all she is, is plot convenience. EVERY problem that occurs is because of her, something she did... or for the sheer fact of her in action. when that is the whole premise of the story, it sadly gets old quick and mind knowingly boring. We have to sit and listen to these pointless Monologs all the time that go on and on and on....for instance, it was like a whole chapter of having to listen to the inner Monolog of the royal chef about Amelia's shrimp fried rice.... when all the ridiculous character had to do was just take a bite and find out.... but nah let's have us listen to stupid non senseical garbage to waist the chapter. And there is the sheer fact no one in the story can just spit out a sentence.... they have to be cut off or studder or just keep quiet.... in order to cause a problem that doesn't need to be made.
All in all the story is just an on and on again rehash of the other 2 books. Amelia does nothing. bad things happen. plot armor activates.

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the chronicles of no progression

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1 out of 5 stars
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1 out of 5 stars

Évalué le: 2024-05-08

the story got 5 books.... and I honestly don't understand what I just listened to. the Mc NEVER learns anything or does he develop. he constantly does the same brainless crap. always getting double crossed. Never knows what to do.

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main character just maintains stupidity

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1 out of 5 stars
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1 out of 5 stars

Évalué le: 2024-05-02

this MC is terribly written. he doesn't learn anything from one moment to the next. constantly does the same thing, then is dumb founded when nothing changes

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just doesn't make sense.

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2 out of 5 stars
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1 out of 5 stars

Évalué le: 2024-04-29

the stor itself was promising. But, like a lot of these stories sadly. The MC is useless and weak AF. For someone who is trapped in the game while EVERYONE else is forced to an 8 hour time limit.... there is no excuse for his weakness and lack of basic useful progression at every turn.

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predictable

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3 out of 5 stars
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2 out of 5 stars
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3 out of 5 stars

Évalué le: 2024-01-05

I thought it would be a good book series. Then as it progressed it became such a predictably weak plot, that it was underwhelming.

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it started out well

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2 out of 5 stars
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3 out of 5 stars
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1 out of 5 stars

Évalué le: 2024-01-04

it started out rather interesting. But with a lot of these stories sadly, we are stuck with another MC which is as intelligent as a speck of dust. 24 years old, but literally has to have everything spelled out for him. He by passes everything that could help him understand what is going on, just for it to cause problems later. (weak plot non sense). The characters just aren't interesting at all.

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Definite disappointment from what I expected.

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1 out of 5 stars
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1 out of 5 stars

Évalué le: 2023-12-04

Thought it would be a decent story. And it had a great concept. But the MC is nothing at all. she's just a wh*re in hear every other minute. it's vimit enducing

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Page de couverture de Last Horizon: Beta

best in some time

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5 out of 5 stars
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5 out of 5 stars

Évalué le: 2023-11-30

GREAT STORY! there is no doom and gloom non sense that is dragged out for no apparent reason aside from having a terrible plot.
it's easy to enjoy the characters, and the unique take on the litrpg.

here Is to the second book. can't wait

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