OYENTE

kathy

  • 1
  • revisión
  • 0
  • votos útiles
  • 61
  • calificaciones

Back to Biology 101

Total
2 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
3 out of 5 stars
Historia
2 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 09-24-13

What could have made this a 4 or 5-star listening experience for you?

I would ike to see this author take the writing further. He made haveing a pencil size worm come out of his leg sound bland. This is where most adults want the real guts of a story. What did it feel like pulling his pants over it, where was it on his leg? Did he need to hide it under his clothes? Was he dating or married? If these experiences were fleshed out it would leave the dull classroom and move into the adult reading arena.

Se ha producido un error. Vuelve a intentarlo dentro de unos minutos.

Has calificado esta reseña.

Reportaste esta reseña