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Interesting Sequence Choice

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2 out of 5 stars
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3 out of 5 stars
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3 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 12-17-24

Perhaps it is because I didn't know what to expect the juxtaposition of recording method and audience was interesting. Not sure the sequencing works well. I am stillnconsidering what the writer intended to say with that choice. Switching the second and third seemsnto make more sense for flow of context. And then, perhaps, making her content more necessary would have helped. The final dialog seems uncertain. But again, I haven't yet figured out the value of all her words to the overall context of the story.

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Okay, But Not Quite

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3 out of 5 stars
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4 out of 5 stars
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3 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 12-05-24

I like Mr. Baldree yet, I didn't get the whimsical feel of Jake as he is now proclaimed to be. In book one, we are told Jake is a college grad but instead sounds more like a recalcitrant high school student reluctant to begin adulting before and after the transition.

I understand that things happen, and the change in the narrator is unavoidable—unfortunately, Mr. Pirhalla has an even less whimsical sounding voice. Perhaps it would have been less jarring if the writer had made some adjustments to the audio version that would have made the vocal changes a part of the narrative. After all, Jake shifted worlds and time. Also, I needed to listen to this volume at a faster-than-normal speed to keep the story from feeling dragged.

The changes in powers also seemed contradictory in light of a lack of explanation. Perhaps, the explanations were in the humdrum parts and I just missed it. I did notice that Jake seems to have changed his mind about the Devine Fruit - originally he describes it as tasting good but then burning and causing pain. Later, the fruit is said to taste bad and is uncomfortable to eat.

Lastly, in this second installment, the writing has more repetition than the first making it less interesting.

It is a valiant effort from MR Pirhalla.
I am a finisher, so I will still listen to book 3 (hoping for the best.

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Good Rhythm

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5 out of 5 stars
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5 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 12-02-24

I am so appreciative that this is not one of those books made long with inane repetition. The writer demonstrates not only respect for the readers imagination but also our intelligence.

Looking forward to the next volume.

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Too Wordy

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2 out of 5 stars
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3 out of 5 stars
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1 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 10-25-24

This absolutely did not need to be so long. Way too much repetition. Over embellishment of everything.

There are details from the first book that got changed in the 5th or 6th book. Verbosity is like lying... it's hard to keep track of what you already said.

I did have to remind myself that Alex is a teenager. Sadly, his memory was like my octogenarian mom who is status post a traumatic brain injury.

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Less is More

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5 out of 5 stars
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5 out of 5 stars
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5 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 07-25-24

Author says this presentation is of the manuscript as it was originally presented from the vault (attic).

Sadly editing adds more than needed or removes what should be left or overlooks what whoukd be removed.

I was enthralled for the majority of this offering. I get easily frustrated by failed attempts to add suspense with verbosity.

I was only tempted to fast forward a couple of time.

A delightful tale. I am looking forward to more from Ellis.

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Grateful

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5 out of 5 stars
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5 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 06-25-24

While written in a by gone era, the wisdom and many of the practices are relevant or van be tweeked for this era.

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Delightful

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5 out of 5 stars
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1 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 06-20-24

Delightful - both the writing and the presentation. Wonderful story of why it is we should have compassion for people we do not understand. We don't always know what others have been or are going through. And if we live long enough, what we are seeing could be our story.

Pleasantly tickled by the twists in the story.

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Still too Garrulous

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4 out of 5 stars
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5 out of 5 stars
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3 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 05-24-24

Delighted that Oleg has stopped referring to e everything as useless simply because he lacks understanding of their use(s) and value. Yes, quite real-world a trait.

I am hoping that in the next volume the writer reigns in the unnecessary overdescribing of items, scenery, and sensations.

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Skipped But Okay

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5 out of 5 stars
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5 out of 5 stars
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5 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 05-15-24

I missed precious book and so missed context for some issues. Nevertheless, I was able to pick up and follow having read/listened to all other volumes.

Looking forward to the next.

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Interestingly Unnerving

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4 out of 5 stars
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4 out of 5 stars
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4 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 05-14-24

Oh! how emotions and curiosity can get us into trouble. It is easy to think about what other options might be better as a bystander looking on. However, the one thing I always recommend is not to make verbal threats when in a conflict. Take action and then they'll know. When you hurl threats (idle or not) they may panic and take rash actions that you will regret before even getting a chance.

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