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written like a screen play

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Reviewed: 04-30-23

the boy said.
the girl said.
this person , that person said. I genuinely tried, however this is very poorly written. mostly done in second and third person format. I made it three hours before I gave up. this will be the second book I have ever returned. congratulations you made my poor author list. the performance was mediocre at best. I think with better writing the narration could have been better.

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poor attempt

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Reviewed: 10-19-21

poor attempt to start a new series
the characters on paradise are poorly thought out.

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ruined it with time travel

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Reviewed: 10-16-21

I have been enjoying the crazy intellectual version of this Harry Potter. time travel is lazy writing. hopefully your intellectual self can figure out why.

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very poorly written

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Reviewed: 09-10-21

took nearly 3 months to finish
I read in between other books
I would not recommend this book

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poorly thought out

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Reviewed: 07-22-21

in no way would a person log into a game to be abused, tortured, and or raped. I can overlook a lot of BS to stay in a storyline, this is just stupid.

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barely made it through

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Reviewed: 07-14-21

just not written very well, if your into beastiality and an abundance of poorly written sex scenes than this book may be for you.
I don't mind sex scenes and harem stuff, I just prefer them as part of the story instead of separate. I also like to have them written a little better.
Miss Parsneau was good, just not much material to work with.

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decent book

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Reviewed: 07-09-21

interesting concept
the series is about 3.5 to 4, however since it is the start of a universe
run on runner

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irritated with MC

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Reviewed: 07-01-21

I really enjoy the series but every fight the MC gets into, he is either saved during the fight or rescued afterwards. I have trouble remembering any fight that the MC has been in, wether it be 1 on 1 or a large battle where he was not saved.
I am now halfway through the Raven's of Death book and so far it is the same.

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pictograph

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Reviewed: 06-26-21

overall a good series, I will finish the series and be able to move on with my life

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I give five stars because......

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Reviewed: 06-24-21

I like the series and the multi-verse as a whole.
this book was quite a bit weaker than the other two.
Frankly I finished this book because Andrea Parsneau kept the book interesting. I was really getting tired of Gus being able to destroy just about anything and everything one minute, then have to be saved the next. the whole series was like this however this book took it to a different level. I would say do not skip this book and leave an honest review.

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