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Tiana C

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Shows promise but the writing is weak

Overall
2 out of 5 stars
Performance
5 out of 5 stars
Story
3 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 06-01-2024

I was sucked into the story early on, excited for the potential. Unfortunately the story didn’t really go anywhere, a lot of interesting plot items were set up but the characters decided to “unpack that later” and never did. The author repeated a lot of descriptions and flipped between modern language and a more traditional use of language. There was a major plot hole that ruined the end of the end of the book, I had already purchased book two so I will listen to book 2 to see if maybe the issues with the plot hole are addressed or not. It’s also generally pg13, if the author took it to adult content it would have been more successful…. Maybe. Reads a little like a Wattpad story, but I don’t regret listening and remain hopeful for the second book.

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Please release book 1

Overall
5 out of 5 stars
Performance
5 out of 5 stars
Story
5 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 13-12-2021

I love these books so much, desperately waiting for book 1 of the series on audiobook

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